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Having a job at university.

       Having a job at university gives advantages and disadvantages to the students. Many advantages that the students get when they have a job. They get much money, new knowledge and experience. The students like to do it. It’s because they can help their parents to bear the output of their financial. It’s about to pay the financial in the university and also the students’ requirement in dailylife. They are also very proud with themselves. They able to get new knowledge and experience about a job and get much money. But, there are many disadvantages, when the students have a job at university. They can’t manage time well. Their schedule usually struck. They usually confused to choose, between doing a job or studying at university. And their score usually descend from usual. It’s because their time to study isn’t enough. So, they get low score. The other disadvantages when the students having a job at university is the students’ time to play with their friends. They can’t play together in an interesting places and chat with the other. In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages when the students having a job at university.